I need some advice on my music

[Tryz]

https://youtu.be/drPiUuhl7UM

[pengzu1991]

dubstep !! thank you!~~~~~~~~~

[pruned_60650470]

 thank you!~~~~~~~~~

[Ohny]

A little bit weak at the intro...but generally it's a good song to play

[sjken1997]

Sounds pretty cool, but perhaps you could remove the static that basically starts at 0:05?

[pruned_5213525]

seems ok

[impure736]

Not bad

[rdega]

Nicee ty love song 

[tychonna]

The static is sorta meh, clean sounds are better overall. Maybe just the sampling/edit was too strong for me.

[pruned_1006288]

goooooooooood