I need some advice on my music

[Chureun]

Hi, guys I'm a beginner and the sound isn't really good, But Could ya, pls give me some advices to be better :

https://www.youtube....h?v=o49AWeZtJdE

[pruned_71934694]

Sounds pretty cool, but perhaps you could remove the static that basically starts at 0:05?

[Chureun]

Sounds pretty cool, but perhaps you could remove the static that basically starts at 0:05?

Isn't a bad idea

[Hellion402]

Not bad atall bro, yeah i agree about the static but after that it was pretty nice

[erronblvck]

Not bad, nice melody, the sound quality a bit weak, but overall nice.

[xStree]

You can try if it's better or not, I agree with Nightdrop

[BroBro]

Pretty good bro.

Are you using fl studio? Maybe I can help you out with stuff since I used to produce instrumentals for my local rap band a while back

 

Here is one of my new chill songs 

https://www.youtube....h?v=OTSppbw_HzE

 

So you can make an idea of what I used to do,and what sometimes I do as a hobby

Edited by XtremeXcata, 05 May 2015 - 05:35 PM.

[Chureun]

Pretty good bro.

Are you using fl studio? Maybe I can help you out with stuff since I used to produce instrumentals for my local rap band a while back

 

Here is one of my new chill songs 

https://www.youtube....h?v=OTSppbw_HzE

 

So you can make an idea of what I used to do,and what sometimes I do as a hobby

Yeah, I am ! Thanx ya 

[Mika]

Nice song, only the water sound or what it is, is a -

With what software did you make this?

[pruned_74033730]

Nice song, but sound a weak