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[VRX]

[Hacknay]

that is fucking peng holy fuck

 

 

 

that is peng as fucking shit mate that is good af well done mate that is some next level shit 

[VRX]

that is fucking peng holy fuck
 
that is peng as fucking shit mate that is good af well done mate that is some next level shit

Can you remove the quote its too long.

[Jackson]

10/10

[slowestloris]

Overall your work looks great and definitely appears close to professional quality. I like very much the alternating use of black and white. The inverse colors back to back give it a really nice flow.

 

The only things that I've noticed are pretty much just nitpicks because overall it's quality.

 

1. Right side of the first slide orient the numbers vertically. It’s the only place in the whole site where they’re oriented as such and it doesn't really add anything UX wise to make up for the takeaway in visual appeal.

2. On slides 2, 3, and 8 your header demarcation line thing overlaps the text. Appears to just be a spacing issue.

3. Use less blank space overall. From a UX standpoint trading off an open feel for more compact, easily viewable information is usually preferred.

4. Hit your copy with a spell/grammar checker (unless your buyer provides the copy) before finalization ("frequently").

 

If you ever wanna chat about the marketing/branding psychology aspects of creating copy feel free to message me. I definitely nerd out on that and actually consult on it in my real life lol

[VRX]

Overall your work looks great and definitely appears close to professional quality. I like very much the alternating use of black and white. The inverse colors back to back give it a really nice flow.

 

The only things that I've noticed are pretty much just nitpicks because overall it's quality.

 

1. Right side of the first slide orient the numbers vertically. It’s the only place in the whole site where they’re oriented as such and it doesn't really add anything UX wise to make up for the takeaway in visual appeal.

2. On slides 2, 3, and 8 your header demarcation line thing overlaps the text. Appears to just be a spacing issue.

3. Use less blank space overall. From a UX standpoint trading off an open feel for more compact, easily viewable information is usually preferred.

4. Hit your copy with a spell/grammar checker (unless your buyer provides the copy) before finalization ("frequently").

 

If you ever wanna chat about the marketing/branding psychology aspects of creating copy feel free to message me. I definitely nerd out on that and actually consult on it in my real life lol

 

Thanks for the feedback sir.

[Alexej27]

 

when design award @BLeach

[CHEAPDIP]

when design award @BLeach

no award for me 

[Asmock01]

15/10!

[robio777]

wow that very nice thx so mluche