just some verses

[damnsun]

umm its just some verses that i wrote, nothing special, trying to work it into a whole song,lemme know what you think.

also i know youll wonder why am i posting this here?/

cuz well i have no other form of interaction with the social network. 

thanks.

 

 

god is a bitch  you only matter when youre rich

sometimes i just wanna be titanic so i can fucking sink(and still be unsinkable)

born into a middle class home, i learned to fight when i was 4 years old

it aint sad or shit, thats just how you gotta grow 

when there are 6 mouths to feed and not enough to eat

when youre dada cant fucking stop (stop fucking)

 

 

life is a deck of cards and youre the exta 

thats what my dad said when he found out i was a smoker

i disappoint thats my thing

aint got a good bone in me you cant even bleach me clean.

 

 

i thought i was a revelation 

dash of white in a sea of blue

turns im a fucking loser with nothing else to do,

so i wrote shit and got high thinking 

whoo!! im something NEW..

Edited by damnsun, 11 October 2018 - 06:29 PM.

[FlamingWes]

Looks good, i cant read it with your flow though, good luck with the song brodie

[damnsun]

update 2

 

fell in love with the way she spoke, those perky lips, and that devil smile

aint no way i was gonna let her go.

but as all good things go,

it went up in smoke,and when the sirens rose,

she tried to hold me close,

like sand i just slipped between her hands, cuz i couldnt keep up,

look up, see that the world was right there infront of me,

all this while keeping up with my mediocrity, when she deserved to be treated like fucking royalty.

 

let me know hows this?

also would love it if others posted things they wrote.