Edited by Miind, 03 December 2017 - 02:05 PM.
[MIND] TWO NEW SIGNATURES
#3
Posted 03 December 2017 - 02:08 PM
#5
Posted 03 December 2017 - 03:10 PM
#6
Posted 03 December 2017 - 04:33 PM
their are some stuff that needs to improve to begin with the render dont forgett it to place it according to the rule of the third more info u can find about it in wikipedia since the render feels a little bit to small.
Secoundly u need to fix the flow since as a viewer u kinda lose the focus from the charakter and the lighting gives it to much distraction.
Last thing is the lighting it feels to bright and giving some part a little bit burn will give the image a better feeling.
But in overall it is pretty ok u need some stuff to work on i suppose.
#8
Posted 03 December 2017 - 07:39 PM
their are some stuff that needs to improve to begin with the render dont forgett it to place it according to the rule of the third more info u can find about it in wikipedia since the render feels a little bit to small.
Secoundly u need to fix the flow since as a viewer u kinda lose the focus from the charakter and the lighting gives it to much distraction.
Last thing is the lighting it feels to bright and giving some part a little bit burn will give the image a better feeling.
But in overall it is pretty ok u need some stuff to work on i suppose.
I really want to thank you for taking your time to point these out for me, I'll make sure I read about the thirds rule as it has caught my interest.
I like the first one so much, quite a nice signature using only blue and grey sclae. Rly nice work!
I think it's really nice too.
#9
Posted 03 December 2017 - 07:55 PM
I really want to thank you for taking your time to point these out for me, I'll make sure I read about the thirds rule as it has caught my interest.
I think it's really nice too.
your welcome i hope i could be a help also another to mention is u have to blurry out some part of the background so u put more focus at the charakter and good luck with your experiments.
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